Dear Watchers, I Need Your Help

I'd do a poll, but my membership has run out, and I have many other expenses to take care of before I renew it, so I'll make this quick and hope people read it.

I have a sound art project due next week and my teacher listened to my piece and told me to make another version with a couple of edits and then pick the better one. But I'm really not sure which sounds better, so take a couple of minutes to listen and tell me which you prefer? (You don't have to understand or like either of them, just let me know which you think sounds better).

Version 1
Version 2

Thanks in advance to anyone who comments, I love you dearly.

(Will write a proper journal about uni things and life at the end of this term, probably)